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Author Topic: The Secret Ingredient - The Teacup VN Festival 2010 Day 9  (Read 3624 times)

Kikered

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The Secret Ingredient - The Teacup VN Festival 2010 Day 9
« on: April 09, 2010, 02:16:55 PM »


Genre: Slice-of-life

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Eric is slowly losing his sense of taste after years of exposure to cafeteria food. Perhaps what he needed all along was a bit of magic.
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« Last Edit: April 09, 2010, 09:05:55 PM by Kikered »

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Re: The Secret Ingredient - The Teacup VN Festival Day 9
« Reply #1 on: April 09, 2010, 03:37:17 PM »
A nicely presented short story over-all.

Hahaha! The overly dramatic music at the intro made me go  ::). Not that it's a bad thing. I enjoyed watching Naomi's different facial expressions. For such a short piece, it's very well put together. Even the credits were simple but effective.

The story itself felt a bit unfinished since the narrator-protagonist never really goes deeper into his relationship with Naomi. It felt more like the introduction of a story rather than the whole thing. I won't complain about the way the plot was constructed though, since from the very beginning, it was really more about "not-disliking" lunch rather than getting to know Naomi.