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MoonlightBomber

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Coccinea - The Teacup VN Festival 2011 Day 4
« on: August 03, 2011, 07:24:35 pm »



Genre: Romance/Adventure

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Kamen Rider Dragon Knight and Puella Magi Madoka Magica crossover. Because of a game set up by someone powerful, Kit Taylor's and Kyouko Sakura's fortunes intertwined. Rated T for violence and suggestive themes.

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« Last Edit: August 05, 2011, 06:59:14 pm by MoonlightBomber »

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Re: Coccinea - The Teacup VN Festival 2011 Day 4
« Reply #1 on: August 05, 2011, 05:39:53 am »
Very impressive, MB. The use of original IP doesn't detract as much from the experience as in your usual fanfics. It's a pity that you still chose to use a fanfic though. You did very well with the limited amount of time and resources that you had at your disposal.

The story itself is quite well-crafted but it's a pity that you still chose to make it a fanfiction. I imagine that it would have been quite a gem of a short piece if you had only chosen to make it an original fiction without using known characters.

Perhaps you'd like to do that for your next piece?

I think what really stands out the most in this VN is the presentation and execution. The music, art, backgrounds and writing really mesh well and consistently with each other. I'd say this is your best visual novel to date, congratulations!

Wright

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Re: Coccinea - The Teacup VN Festival 2011 Day 4
« Reply #2 on: September 30, 2011, 05:05:26 am »
Why was the character "Mayuri" taken from the Bleach anime?
I don't get it. What was this story about? Does it take place in the soul society?

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Re: Coccinea - The Teacup VN Festival 2011 Day 4
« Reply #3 on: September 30, 2011, 08:02:40 pm »
Why was the character "Mayuri" taken from the Bleach anime?
I don't get it. What was this story about? Does it take place in the soul society?

Canonically, this take place outside the Soul Society (apologies if I don't watch Bleach).

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Re: Coccinea - The Teacup VN Festival 2011 Day 4
« Reply #4 on: October 02, 2011, 05:22:11 am »
I still don't get it.
If you don't watch Bleach, how did you know about the characters?
Is the story yours, or did you take it from some manga?

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Re: Coccinea - The Teacup VN Festival 2011 Day 4
« Reply #5 on: October 02, 2011, 11:42:43 pm »
I still don't get it.
If you don't watch Bleach, how did you know about the characters?
Is the story yours, or did you take it from some manga?

OK, time for a lengthier explanation.

This VN was actually a product of a play-by-post role playing game called the "Traitor Game" at the Hero TV Forums. Some lines in the VN were taken verbatim from the posts made by me and other forumites, which is why you were guessing that I knew the other characters involved.